Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 Paper Title: No. of Pages: 0 Paper Style: APA Paper Type: Research Taken English? Yes English as Second Language? No Feedback Areas: Sentence Structure, Grammar & Mechanics Paper Goals: A final paper on ADHA. In APA format. I struggle with sentence structure and APA format. Also I struggle with using words that do not add value to assignments. Proofing Summary: Hello Tiffany, Thank you for submitting your paper to NetTutor. My name is Kevin, and I enjoyed reading about ADHD. Strengths: You have a comprehensive assessment of ADHD here. Well done. Your assessment is well researched and well supported. Suggestions: I made grammatical suggestions where I felt they were appropriate. Consider reviewing APA guidelines about references and citations. This information can be found on the Purdue OWL website. (I did make specific mention about a couple issues I noticed in the course of your paper). The first instances of repeated issues are pointed out, and suggestions for corrections to be made are given where possible. Please use your writing resources as well as the given suggestions for corrections to help make revisions and improve your writing. You can also return to the Paper Center for additional reviews of your work. As always, feel free to join a Live Tutoring Session with a tutor to receive immediate feedback on any additional questions you may have, including any questions you may have on the review of this paper. Keep up the good work, and thanks for using NetTutor! page 1 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 page 2 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 Remember to include the page number of the information used, if your source provides them. If this is the medical definition of this disorder, then ignore this comment. If it is not, then "impulsivity" is not a word. Try "impulsiveness" instead. page 3 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 For sources that have 3-5 author's APA guidelines state that you should list all of the author's last names the first time you reference the source, then use the first author's last name and et al. for every reference after the first. This is worded awkwardly. page 4 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 page 5 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 research? page 6 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 page 7 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 page 8 / 12 Proofed Paper: ntp694555 - Mon Sep 30 23:38:51 EDT 2019 ...